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Good but that name...

The animation was good - scenes a bit rushed. Voice acting needed to be in sync more. The voice acting needed a little bit more personality. The movies a little bit longer.

I like the story, I'm sure as time goes on the who/what/where will be explained.

However, the name... Was I not the only one who thought dirty?

Swingers - people who exchange sex partners.
Thuderclap - sometimes refered to as that clapping sound the butt makes during sex..

>.> Or does only my mind instantly go to the gutter.

Should have stayed with your original story

I liked the original better. Nice updated graphics though!

Original:
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /294424

loved it

loved the song twist.
loved the grahics.

my favorite part is the very end where the zombie keeps eating that same piece that falls out of his stomach.

awesome job, keep it up.

Awesome

Very fun, but it could usse come work. A bit tweaking and you could go console.
I didnt find easy or normal hard, but insane was well... insane. I played for about 1 1/2 hours before i had to go to bed.

Like:
-the huge rift choices, its mind boggling
-band customization
-"learning other songs"
-playing at different concerts
-being a real band
-the hold mouse click and using the arrow keys
-rift stopper button
-the ability to have multiple bands AND change from them
-the speed of changing clothes on the characters

Dislikes:
-You almost compeltely skipped over the "how to play" on the tutorials. You assumed it was very easy, apparently its not. there are two different balls, what do they mean? I have no f-n clue.
-6 key set up. I think what would have been better instead of the revolver do a 2 on top, one on left, two on bottom, one on right. So the key set up wouldnt be qweasd, but weadzx circular around S. And 894623 around 5.
-not explaining how to unlock more of the "hang out" things (should say with just a scroll over)
-not explaining about the hold mouse click and use mouse keys (noticed it, kinda small)
-the lag, I have a powerful comp (DX10 games on ultra high run smooth and have 5mb connection), and still lagged at some points

Suggestions:
-Have the balls come out different colors, associated with the appropriate color. I figure you didnt do this because ther "other" games go by color, but there is a reason for it. It makes things easier to read, especially when all notes come out of the same space
-work on the sync, i noticed in some song off a bit
-Put back in the randomization rift button
-have the Del key... delete music
-downloadable (which im sure your going to do)
-bring back the penguin
-have a quick concert button, it auto picks a location
-have a random button, it randomly chooses a song from the list
-if you can (maybe not here but on the download) add the lyrics
-if you are doing a streak have your character/toon do something different. Like head bang, "heat up" to the point of catching on fire, girls throwing panties at his feet, etc.
-allow the choice of female characters
-have the follow music notes FOLLOW by default. Dont know why by default you wouldnt want to follow along the song
-go into way more detail about the tabs, i have no clue what to do with that
-facial paint, nuff said
-have your score at the end of each song(which is what you have), then have a % of got correct, with number of correct, streak count, number of wrong notes. Then at the end of a concert have an average of everything
-reduce the amount you drop for missing a note, its way to much and way to slow to get back up. It drops to about 80% of the meter if you miss a note. Think about if your listening to a RL cover band and they miss a note, would you be mad? maybe a lil, would you think 1/5th less of them? prob not.
-lower that f-n sound if you miss. Its so loud it literally messes you up from hearing the song for the next note.

im sure if i sat here for a bit more i could think of more. hope this helps you out.

Very inventive

I liked the game, I liked the mixture.

Didnt think it was to hard (Beat it on the first try with no deaths).

At first I wasn't sure what to do, so I just built paths to make sure mario can go right. Which apparently what I was supposed to do.

The castle at the end was neat, a little tricky. I thought I had to fill in all the spots, but then almost out of time just tried to fit whatever in there.

With a few tweaks, this game could be better

Anyways Suggestions:
-Under how to play, put that you can "tetris" or clear lines in the tetris game. Then put how many blocks it had to be across. I didn't realized I could clear line until I was near the end of the game.
-SHOW THE NEXT TETRIS PIECE
-give us a button to ethier a. throw a piece away (which isnt really tetris) or b. instantly put a piece down (which is tetris)
-Put a run in the mario game really disappointed in that
-Dont know if this happens but if not, if you tetris/clear a line with blocks that have ? on it, put the items in the ? into your inventory (life, mushroom score, or coins)
-make new stages (at least 3 more, one with water, one underground, and one with bowser and his castle)
-out turtles in the game, and all the mechanics that go with it

hope this helps

very fun, a little hard though

very fun game. But I found it a little hard. I can see that diablo influnced this... alot. But thats a good thing. I ony got up the the 2nd boss before stopping for bed. Might come back tomorrow. I like this game.

I dont know if my "partners" are supposed to attack but so far niether has done anything. (Okay I figured it out, tisk tisk, Aztec doesnt have a basic attack -_-)

Likes:
-ability to go back and forth from the levels
-listing the number of revivors left

Anyways, suggestions:
-Have a chest/bank
-show how much EXP each kill is worth
-show how much exp is needed to level (number wise)
-tell us in the tutorial when the dragon is supposed to start attacking/helping
-tell us in the tutorial when/how the partner should be attacking (i think this might be a bug for me though)
-have quests
-DONT ALLOW THE TEXT TO RUN OFF THE GAME! When you highlight over an item that you have equipped, like the 2ndary weapon/shield, you cant read it! Change that. Very annoying
-Have an item to port you home incase your about to die (because the portal turns off right away)
-Have the option to port back home for the first 5 seconds in-case someone chooses the wrong level.
-Change the font of the talking text, even on HQ its still blurred together/hard to read.
-Have ways to change music, maybe.
-have a way to attack at the NE, NW, SE, SW cornor of the guy. As it stands he can only attack N, S, E, W, but the enemies can attack in more directions.
-have a sprint/run option for a quick attack
-have a button to block with a shield and the shield reduce damage significantly insteada, % = not worth having, unless the % is greator than 40+
-have the enemies spawn in random spots, i can redo the same level 10 times and all the mobs spawn at the same pointd each time
-Give the mage a basic attack (even if its some puny fireball or a staff hit)
-be able to buy bags to add more inventory space.
-put the shop on the same side as the portal. As it stands the biggest time waster is runnign back and forth to the shop.
-add bows and arrows
-have the ability to REBUY something you accidently sell
-have multiple pages of things to buy, because sometimes I want to buy the the lower stuff because money is slow to get in this game
-the ability to straff
-have every boss drop something, at least 1 thing. Its ridiculas killing a boss and getting shit for it
-have the main guy have some sort of magical ability or special abilities, like a stomp knock-back, or something.
-make pick up items more noticable. sparkles, very luminated, something. with a bunch of bodies on the ground its hard to see items.
-DONT ALLOW MONSTERS TO ATTACK THROUGH WALLS/OBSTACLES! >.<
-reduce the range of the spear guys.. its just plain unfair... and unfun. (ESPECIALLY THE UP!!!!!! Im way out of the way and STILL GET HIT)
-make the word gold under inventory... gold.
-dont have all the mobs mainly focus on the main guy. If im running around in a circle, and my "helpers" are hitting them, wouldnt a smart person stop chasing me?
-if you click on an NPC have the ability to end the conversation right away instead of going through the entire dialogue
-let us know how much more food the dragon needs before the next upgrade.

Bug(s):
-When i bought the sword of thousand truths and then equipped it on main hand, with superior sword as off hand, i was swinging to test the speed. Out drops an iron axe. haha

i like it

I like the drawing, only a few things I find weird/off.

Weird things:
-the balloon has TEETH! O.O
-the guys zipper looks like... a... yeah... >.> it even sticks out.

I love it

your comments that is... you get 4 for the drawing, and 3 for your comments.

"Author's Response: September 10, 2009
Why don't you ride a wheelbarrow full of dicks up my ass?"

hahahahahaha!

Thats like Joe Dirt insults. How about my face to your ass.. i mean... you ass to my face... yeah, dont mess with me.

Overall, I think your making fun of all the other artists with your drawings and egotistical comments. Its funny, none-the-less.

If you are serious then:

this drawing is to dark. The lines of the objects are to wobbly, it seems to me that they seem more cartoonish, instead of realistic. Whats with teh spot on the cup? is that a whole or a stain? It seems like you made one of those flash animations that constantly have everything moving around, and hit print screen on a random scene.